kids activities have been shifted from outdoor to rooms specifically to screens and they are going far from the important facets of their life due to the extreme usage of computer games. The particular topic asserts that whether the role of computer games for children; bad or not? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
To begin with, there are some people who believe that playing video games improve the hand-eye co-ordination of children which lead their level of concentration at a high point. Moreover, they would be able to do every task with full attention if they have once developed the ability of concentration in themselves. They further believe that it is important for the overall development of the children because children learn how to follow the instructions carefully by playing computer games because the instructions have been followed by them while playing any tasking game. For example, while playing video games, students have to cross various levels to reach at a final destination so they play the game with full attention and follow the instructions carefully therefore, it may lead them to follow the instructions of their known ones.
On the flip side, there are some antagonists to this assertion who believe that it is not good for children to play video games. They bolster their view point by claiming that the children who play video games are more likely to be far away from their family and friends. Moreover, they become addicted towards these games when play it above from the limit and it may lead them socially isolated as most of the time they endulge themselves in playing computer games rather than to conversate with other people. For example, such type of children would be disconnected with their families and they do not learn the morale and social values. It may only be achieved if they would spend most of the with their friends and family.
Nevertheless, weighing both the opinions, I tend to believe that there is no single conclusion still, I take this ground that computer games should be limited in use otherwise, it would be dangerous for the children if they would make use of it excessively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Kids
kids activities have been shifted from outdo...
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Line 3, column 243, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble to do every task with full attention if they have once developed the ability ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, while, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 5.60731707317 838% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 965.302439024 191% => OK
No of words: 376.0 196.424390244 191% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89627659574 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 3.73543355544 118% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57771357764 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 106.607317073 175% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497340425532 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 283.868780488 199% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 1.53170731707 653% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.5494495993 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.615384615 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.9230769231 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76923076923 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233361303354 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100714380905 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785534156648 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151747386166 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0126148329459 0.0819641961636 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 40.7170731707 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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