Environmental issues have become the major concern of our time, and many believe that extinction of specific species of plants and animals is the most significant threat, while others have a different view. Both sides of the argument will be discussed here before reaching a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, people who support the idea point towards the ecological changes while highlighting the imbalances in different food chains. They state the example of the tiger and deer ecosystem where the change in the numbers of one impacts the other. If the number declines for the tiger, the figure for deer rise significantly which leads to disappearance of grasslands and consequently other species depending on the grass fields will go extinct as their food source is in scarcity. Furthermore, the people who support go further mentioning the negative effects caused by specific trees eradication. They mention data showing the dependent animals losing their habitats as a result. Moreover, such occurrence makes the situation even more grave as these animals rely on them also for food.
In contrast, the opponents point to other issues such as climate change and global warming. Firstly, they count these changes as the root cause of the recent rise in natural disasters. Furthermore, they think that due to extreme weather our planet is changing rapidly, and the consequences are probably far flung than we can assume. They indicate the rise of sea level, global rise in the temperature and the changed patterns in seasons. Recent researches also support this view and many experts are persistently expressing their concerns about the negative outcomes of global climatic changes. It appears that the issue of changed climate is far more severe to be called a major threat for life itself on our planet.
In conclusion, I feel the extinction of different trees and other lives definitely has its major impacts, however, The changing patterns in climate can lead us towards a catastrophe where life itself could be under threat.
- Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
- The table below shows statistics about the top five countries for international tourism in 2012 and 2013 73
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals Others say that there are more important environmental problems Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 73
- In a number of countries some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport Disucss both thes 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 5.60731707317 446% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 965.302439024 178% => OK
No of words: 330.0 196.424390244 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20909090909 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69482550106 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 106.607317073 177% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572727272727 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 283.868780488 188% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9553496031 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 1.13902439024 790% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123830240154 0.215688989381 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412261522965 0.103423049105 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042925579455 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083102436416 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066978130543 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 40.7170731707 226% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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