Some people think that students should be allowed to love at school. Do you agree or disagree?
Everyone has the human rights of freedom, living and loving. However, loving at school has been a controversial topic. To the best of my knowledge, students are not allowed to love at school. First and foremost, falling in love soon may have bad affect on students’ studying. Seeing that they spend so much time on chatting or going out for date with their partner, the time for their learning will be restricted. For example, as a usual, they must self-study at home about two or three hours per day. Now, there is no time or a little time for their studying. As a result, it will make their schoolastic result worse and worse. In the second place, loving at this age can make damage both physically and mentally when students have relationship, intimacy and go over allowed limit. When it comes to the topic of loving at school, most of people have a low opinion of this. For example, parents will go to great lengths to prevent their child from falling in love soon, the people around them will object to their love because they think that loving at school is very bad. A child at this age is very sensitive so they don’t have enough confidence to face up to these criticisms. Therefore, they can easily suffer from psychological illness or don’t trust in anyone especially their parents. Almost everyone don’t agree on loving soon, but on the other hand, it brings about some good affect. At school, some couples always learn together or share with each other sadness and joyness. This not only makes them become more happy but it also makes their life more beautiful. All in all, despite my approval of not giving the students permit to love at school, I still think everyone should one time try to express their thoughts and emotions to the person they love. Loving soon is not as black as it is painted, whether it is good or bad depends on the way students love right or wrong.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 247, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...most, falling in love soon may have bad affect on students' studying. Seeing that th...
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Line 1, column 837, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...comes to the topic of loving at school, most of people have a low opinion of this. For example...
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Line 1, column 976, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... their child from falling in love soon, the people around them will object to their love because they ...
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Line 1, column 1628, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...iful. All in all, despite my approval of not giving the students permit to love a...
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Line 1, column 1661, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'loving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'permit' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: loving
...oval of not giving the students permit to love at school, I still think everyone shoul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, still, therefore, for example, as a result, in the second place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 5.60731707317 589% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 965.302439024 162% => OK
No of words: 338.0 196.424390244 172% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63905325444 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 3.73543355544 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41050738419 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 106.607317073 174% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550295857988 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 283.868780488 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0669808189 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1111111111 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 3.70975609756 323% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295291983687 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980100263405 0.103423049105 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0906194614531 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.295291983687 0.15604864568 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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