Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The line graph illustrate the number of cars which users were owned in UK over the period of 30 years.
Overall, there were the remarkably changes in car ownership in UK between 1975 and 2005.While the number of users possessing 1 car and 2 cars in oder had a tend to increase ,the people who don't have any car dropped by roughly.On the other hand, the figure of car ownership of one car remained at a similar level over the period.
The users owning 2 cars and 3 cars were around 7 % and 3 % respectively in UK in 1975.After 10 years, both of these figures also experience a slight increase then remained at a stable level until 1995 before peaking at around 18 % and 9 % respectively at the end of the period.
Meanwhile, the no car ownership was very popular in 1975 with 43 % which sharply dropped to 25 % during following 10 years and gradually fell until 2005.Finally,users owing 1 car were 45 % in 1975 and reduced to around 37 % in 1985 then bounded to 45 % again in the final of 2005.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...r ownership in UK between 1975 and 2005.While the number of users possessing 1 car an...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...possessing 1 car and 2 cars in oder had a tend to increase ,the people who dont have a...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd 2 cars in oder had a tend to increase ,the people who dont have any car dropped...
^^
Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... had a tend to increase ,the people who dont have any car dropped by roughly.On the ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...ho dont have any car dropped by roughly.On the other hand, the figure of car owner...
^^
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... The users owning 2 cars and 3 cars were around 7 % and 3 % respectively in UK in...
^^
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
... 7 % and 3 % respectively in UK in 1975.After 10 years, both of these figures also ex...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
... 10 years and gradually fell until 2005.Finally,users owing 1 car were 45 % in 1975 and...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , users
...rs and gradually fell until 2005.Finally,users owing 1 car were 45 % in 1975 and reduc...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, then, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6969195727 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.4926829268 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.075548212 43.030603864 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.5 112.824112599 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.5 22.9334400587 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 5.23603664747 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0290439188476 0.215688989381 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.019131060736 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0250472333648 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.019131060736 0.15604864568 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250472333648 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.2329268293 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.9970731707 182% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 88, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: While
...r ownership in UK between 1975 and 2005.While the number of users possessing 1 car an...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...possessing 1 car and 2 cars in oder had a tend to increase ,the people who dont have a...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd 2 cars in oder had a tend to increase ,the people who dont have any car dropped...
^^
Line 2, column 189, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... had a tend to increase ,the people who dont have any car dropped by roughly.On the ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: On
...ho dont have any car dropped by roughly.On the other hand, the figure of car owner...
^^
Line 3, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... The users owning 2 cars and 3 cars were around 7 % and 3 % respectively in UK in...
^^
Line 3, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
... 7 % and 3 % respectively in UK in 1975.After 10 years, both of these figures also ex...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 153, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Finally
... 10 years and gradually fell until 2005.Finally,users owing 1 car were 45 % in 1975 and...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 160, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , users
...rs and gradually fell until 2005.Finally,users owing 1 car were 45 % in 1975 and reduc...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, so, then, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 806.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6969195727 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.4926829268 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.075548212 43.030603864 200% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.5 112.824112599 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.5 22.9334400587 198% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 5.23603664747 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0290439188476 0.215688989381 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.019131060736 0.103423049105 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0250472333648 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.019131060736 0.15604864568 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250472333648 0.0819641961636 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.2329268293 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 10.3012195122 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.3 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.9970731707 182% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.