The table above shows data on the demographics of four nations.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,
and make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides key information about the population, gross domestic product per person and life expectancy in four different countries. Overall, there are two very noticeable features. Firstly, china has by far the highest number of citizens, but they have the lowest economic output per person out of the four powers. Secondly, the united States has the highest earnings, but the lowest life expectancy. china has the highest number of people with around 1.3 billion citizens, however, the average person only produces $6,807 and the Chinese average age upon death is 75.2 years. this is in contrast with the USA where people earn, on average, nearly 10 times more than a normal man or woman from china. Despite this, Americans live significantly shorter lives at just 69.2 years. The united Kingdom has the lowest population of the four countries with just under 65 million, but notably has the second highest gdp and the highest life expectancy with $41,787 and 81.5 years respectively. Russia has a population of nearly 144 million and a relatively low gdp per capita of nearly $15,000.
- The table below gives information about languages with the most native speakers. 73
- Governments must ensure that their major cities receive the financial support they need in order to thrive because it is primarily in cities that a nation's cultural traditions are preserved and generated. 66
- Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed 83
- The table above shows data on the demographics of four nations.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities. 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 410, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: China
...rnings, but the lowest life expectancy. china has the highest number of people with a...
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Line 1, column 524, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...owever, the average person only produces ,807 and the Chinese average age upon dea...
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Line 1, column 584, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...e average age upon death is 75.2 years. this is in contrast with the USA where peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06111111111 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49949994999 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4303540561 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.222222222 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0601364110604 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0264679035329 0.103423049105 26% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0314356575899 0.0843802449381 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601364110604 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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