table agr group rode bicycles in 2011
The table compares the proportion of male and female cyclists of one town divided into five groups of age in the year 2011.
Overall, it is obvious that the figure for cyclists who aged 0 to 17 was far higher than those who were in the other age groups. It is also noticeable that females cycled more than males in all age groups.
In the age group 0-9, the percentage of girls who cycled was 51.3 %, this was marginally higher than 50.3% of boys. However, there was a dramatically fall in the percentage of male cyclists when they reached the stage between the ages 10 and 17, with 24,6%, compared to the figure of female cyclists remained high, at 42,2%.
The percentage of cyclists continued to experienced a downward trend in the age group 18-39 and 40-59 in both genders. In the former group, the figure for females decreased over a half to 17.1% while the figure for their male counterparts was only less than 10 %. In the latter group, those figures for females and males fell further to 12.3 % and 8.0 % respectively. Nevertheless, there were a significant growth of those who rode bicycles, reaching 18.5% for women and 13.2 % for men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nevertheless, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67821782178 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48637914689 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7861831647 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103668892313 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522531669171 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056450973725 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0792853071987 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0743683526408 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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