The bar chart and table compare weekly household consumption of water, measured in liter in person, and the rates of water charges per cubic meter in five different countries
Overall, Americans and Italians use the most water on a weekly basis, which is probably because of the lowest costs of water in these countries
As regards water usage, each American consumes 380 liters a week on average, which doubles the figure for a British. An Italian individual uses the second largest volume of water around 330 liters per week, 100 liters more than the domestic use of the German. With only about 140 liters per person per week, France is recorded as the country with the lowest household water consumption among the five countries
As far as the cost of water is concerned, being priced at 2.15 US dollars per cubit meter, water is the most expensive on Germany, costing nearly one dollar more than the second-placed price in France and over six times the figure for Italy with 0.35 US dollar for each cubic meter - the cheapest price on the table. Each US citizen has to pay 0.45 dollar for one cubic meter, compared to a much higher price with 0.7 dollar in the UK
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, as regards, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68932038835 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26755895472 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553398058252 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 22.4926829268 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 162.564602543 43.030603864 378% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.5 112.824112599 214% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.5 22.9334400587 225% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 8.25 5.23603664747 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24666858324 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141309880454 0.103423049105 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973645543514 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176596026675 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070502608102 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.4 13.2329268293 200% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 61.2550243902 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.3012195122 214% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.81 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.06136585366 122% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 11.4329268293 236% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.9970731707 204% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 11.0658536585 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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