The given table illustrates the differences in the figure of employees and factories in England and Wales during in the period from 1851 to 1901.
Overall, England and Wales witnessed a downward trend in numbers of employees and an upward trend in establishing of factories.
It is clear that the requirement of male labor was higher than female counterparts, but in the year 1861, the number of female employees higher than male employees of 29,220 employees. However, in both these countries the amount of labor expected dramatic declined constantly from 477,100 employees (in which 287,100 males and 190,000 females) to 61,000 employees (31,000 males and 30,000 females) from 1851 to 1901.
In contrast, in England and Wales as day follows day many factories were constituted. In the first year of the table the number of factories stood at 225 and soared to 721 factories in 1881, despite of an upward trend in 1891 this number was documented significant decreased to 625 and by the end of the research, a marginal reduction of 25 factories was reported.
- The chart below show the percentage of whole world population in four countries from 1950 to 2000, will projection till 2050. 67
- In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? what solutions can you suggest? 67
- The Graph show the proportion of the population 65 aged and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.-Syerapke- (rewrite) 73
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- Some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to help other. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02272727273 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75712825207 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528409090909 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1551937795 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.333333333 112.824112599 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 22.9334400587 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22274962469 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119730399381 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661279880593 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151543230746 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660190073902 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.3012195122 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.43 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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