The table below given information on the proportion of carbohydrates protein and fat diets

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The table below given information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat diets

The pie charts given below illustrate the proporation of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets. The data is measured in percentage. Overall, all of the pie charts were similar biggest percentage of all categories which was carbohydrates. On the other hand, fat was the smallest percentage.

The proportion of the diet divide into three categories, such as carbohydrates, protein, and fat. In average diet, both of carbohydrates and protein were similar biggest precentage, which got two fifths. This was also the case for healthy diet and healthy diet for sport which had carbohydrates as the popular proportion, it got half. On the other hand, protein represent the second most popular proportion in the healthy diet and healthy diet for sport. Both of fat in Average diet and healthy diet, had a fifth. But in healthy diet for sport fat as the lowest level, which was less than a fifth.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 160, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ata is measured in percentage. Overall, all of the pie charts were similar biggest percent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, second, so, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 759.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02649006623 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88177649404 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483443708609 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 225.9 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.143656049 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318908462541 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135752526448 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088463140777 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21253031066 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694386688853 0.0819641961636 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.1 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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