The table below gives information about the average annual spending of university students in 3 different countries
The table compares the average expenditure of college pupils among 3 different countries namely A, B and C.
Overall, the amount of money which country A’s young people spent accounted for the largest part in total spending among 3 countries. In addition, students in all countries spent the highest proportion of their budget for accommodation and food.
Students in country A consumed a total of $5000 per year, compared to $4500 and $1500 for those in countries B and C respectively.
In term of accommodation, the percentage of an average yearly expenses of young people in country A was highest, at 45%; followed by that in country B and C, at 35% and 3% respectively. By contrast, students in country C spent more in food, which accounted 36% in total spending. The figures for country A and B were 22% and 28% respectively.
There was the similar proportion of spending in leisure between A and B, at 22% and 28%; where as the figure for C was lower considerably; just 12%. 21% of total spending of university students in country C was for books, compared to 9% of A and 3% of B. Students in all countries spent lowest proportion on others, which accounted for 8%, 5% and 1% of their yearly expenses.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...3 different countries namely A, B and C. Overall, the amount of money which count...
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...eisure between A and B, at 22% and 28%; where as the figure for C was lower considerably...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'spent the lowest'.
Suggestion: spent the lowest
... and 3% of B. Students in all countries spent lowest proportion on others, which accounted f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69483568075 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94917156291 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488262910798 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.4834877356 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228814403741 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111449973713 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611191500521 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149222338648 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0413503992768 0.0819641961636 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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