A glance at the provided table illustrates the information about railway transport comparation in four countries in 2007. The data compared were the number of users, the length of journey in kilometers per head and the weight of cargo carried in billions of tons. In general, it is clearly apparent that Japan utilized railway transport the most compared the other three countries.
Looking more in detail from the table, Japan marked as the highest country in railway transport users at 27 while the other countries showed only below half from 5.5 to 5.9 in Italy and the UK and much lower at 0.3 in the USA. Linearly, the Japanese passenger kilometers per head were also reported as the longest at 1,980 kilometers per head. Meanwhile, passenger kilometers in the UK and Italy ranged around 770-780 kilometers per head and those in the USA only 80 kilometers per head. On the other hand, surprisingly, although the USA showed the lowest figures in users and length of journey taken, regarding the weight of cargo carried by the passengers in cumulative, the USA reported the heaviest cargo at 2,820 billion compared to the other countries. The UK, Japan and Italy railway passengers only carried less than one hundredth of it at 22.2, 23.01, and 21.9 respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 885, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... at 22.2, 23.01, and 21.9 respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, regarding, so, while, in general, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96244131455 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6407104817 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3685340983 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.125 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129605137083 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776702114073 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146062176725 0.0843802449381 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140599200089 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952479056325 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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