The table below gives information about a restaurant’s average sales in three different branches in 2016.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrated a restaurants sales transaction of three different branches in 2016. And also show the total values and most popular items of the branches
First of all, Georgia Street located branch have high numbers of transaction over the period 854 times. Simultaneously Dunsmuir and Drake street branches have 750 and 390 Time transaction. Although the business of drake street branch has quite low where only 200 numbers of eat in transaction, which was lowest numbers comparing to other two. Likewise, gergia and dunsuir branches has 405 and 385 time Eat-in transaction respectively.
On the other hand, the transaction value of Drake streets was remarkable where $9.02 per year. Same as georgia Street has $ 10.69 annual income. Meanwhile Dunsuir has only $5.61 of income. At the same time the choice of customer has been slightly different as per the branch location. Chicken Burger is most popular items at highest grosser branch georgia. Same as chicken wings and chicken pasta was highly prefer item among dunsuir and drake streets branches.
As a conclusion, the business of this restaurant has been quite satisfactory. And also the popular item of the restaurant was different among the branch.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a restaurant' or simply 'restaurants'?
Suggestion: a restaurant; restaurants
The table illustrated a restaurants sales transaction of three different br...
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Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and most popular items of the branches First of all, Georgia Street located bra...
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Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the lowest'.
Suggestion: was the lowest
...00 numbers of eat in transaction, which was lowest numbers comparing to other two. Likewis...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: CURRENCY_SPACE[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: '$10'.
Suggestion: $10
...02 per year. Same as georgia Street has $ 10.69 annual income. Meanwhile Dunsuir has...
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Line 3, column 144, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...orgia Street has $ 10.69 annual income. Meanwhile Dunsuir has only .61 of income. At the ...
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Line 3, column 405, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...cken wings and chicken pasta was highly prefer item among dunsuir and drake streets br...
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Line 4, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...taurant was different among the branch.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, likewise, so, while, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1020.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23076923077 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68477900718 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538461538462 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7042420366 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.4615384615 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 22.9334400587 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 5.23603664747 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127522273601 0.215688989381 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592782024052 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825189644029 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111208026099 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745915171882 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.46 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.