The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by zentirot on Wed, 01/02/2019 - 12:51

The table compares three different categories of information belonging to the underground stations in six following cities, which are London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto along with Los Angeles.
It is clear that the capital of UK possesses by far the oldest underground station as well as the longest railroad. The underground system that sees the most considerable number of passengers in each year is located in Tokyo, however.
In 1863, London underground railways system was opened with 394 kilometres of route, which is almost well over twice as high as that for any other cities’ underground stations. Interestingly, despite ranked fifth among six surveyed cities with regard to the length of railway, Tokyo underground station sees the largest quantity of passengers passing per year, at roughly 1927 million people. Noticeably, the statistics relating to Paris underground railways system is ranked second with respect to every aspect of information, from date opened to the length of route to the number of customers per year. Since 1975, the other three underground stations have been operated in Washington DC, Kyoto and L.A., receiving average 144 million, 45 million and 50 million passengers in each year respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, well, as well as, with regard to, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44845360825 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87974610216 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613402061856 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.3332180328 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.0 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151416247111 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728435245444 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414466515116 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110103906763 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036296792988 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.2329268293 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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