The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by jin96 on Fri, 10/04/2019 - 04:57

The table indicates that information in terms of railway systems given by six cities, date, kilometre and the number of passengers in million. Overall, railway in the LA constructed far later than London as well as almost 2000 million passengers travel per year in Tokyo.

It is noticeable that the earlier opening has more railways. London started to operate in 1863, almost 40 years faster than the following city, Paris. Also, London accounts for far the most kilometres of railways, which slightly below than 400, at 394. Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC and Kyoto opened the system in 1900s with 199, 155, 126, 11 kilometres of routes respectively. However, the LA only started service in 2001 but also, more twice than Kyoto, at 28 km.

Tokyo accounts for the most passenger rates, which is 1927, followed by this, Paris exceeds over 1,000, at 119. The others transport fewer than 1000, London occupies 775, while Washington DC transports 144. Surprisingly, remaining two cities are even lower than 100, Kyoto at 45 and the LA at 50.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...lometre and the number of passengers in million. Overall, railway in the LA constructed...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 310, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1900s'.
Suggestion: in the 1900s
...shington DC and Kyoto opened the system in 1900s with 199, 155, 126, 11 kilometres of ro...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02298850575 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51238838341 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6894248495 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.4 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0757767645515 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337823164566 0.103423049105 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746362021131 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643601852221 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749020024929 0.0819641961636 91% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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