Examine the arguments in favour of and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
Write at least 250 words.
In fact, as time passed through, lots of experiments have brought us sophisticated lives compared with centuries ago. However, it somehow affects some creatures other than humans in order to obtain accurate and safer inventions. Hence, animal experiments have been a huge controversial debate among scientists. Some argue that it is unavoidable for humans’ wellbeing whereas others contend that far more animals are sacrificed unnecessarily. This essay will explore the both perspectives throughout some evidences.
To start with, many advocate that animals should be put to use in experiments in regard to safety and developments. Most of inventions, for example, cosmetics, drugs and scientific developments, used in daily lives have been underwent such experiments. Hence, humans and other species can afford promising lives. In other words, if we could not invent pain killers or tuberculosis medicines, it is certainly impossible to enjoy your life. Furthermore, females make up almost everyday with cosmetics from result of animal experiments because such examples are quite related to our safety.
On the other hand, some argue that it is agreeable with little number of animals used, however, too many animals are killed for no reasons and does not provide enough outcomes, many contend. They criticise that animals are not respected or treated appropriately and also say that consciousness of animals’ rights should be treated as equally as humans’. For instance, in some mouse experiment laboratories, in spite of 10 mice are sufficient for new drug test but far more are indeed used for tiny unimportant experiments and thrown in bins. Hence, new legislations for animal experiments in terms of rights, treatments and cognition have to set in all over the world.
In conclusion, animal experiments have been and will be the most important part of developments for bright future for entire creatures, however, animals’ rights are not being respected and thus, laws towards it should be discussed.
Therefore, I advocate the perspective of animals’ rights to be treated well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun advocate seems to be countable; consider using: 'many advocates'.
Suggestion: many advocates
...out some evidences. To start with, many advocate that animals should be put to use in ex...
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Line 5, column 117, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the inventions') or simply say ''Most inventions''.
Suggestion: Most of the inventions; Most inventions
...s in regard to safety and developments. Most of inventions, for example, cosmetics, drugs and scie...
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Line 5, column 226, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'undergone'.
Suggestion: undergone
...lopments, used in daily lives have been underwent such experiments. Hence, humans and oth...
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Line 5, column 297, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to promise'.
Suggestion: to promise
...ce, humans and other species can afford promising lives. In other words, if we could not ...
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Line 5, column 476, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...fe. Furthermore, females make up almost everyday with cosmetics from result of animal ex...
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Line 9, column 340, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...imals' rights should be treated as equally as humans'. For instance, in some mou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, in other words, in regard to, in spite of, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1805.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55384615385 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10489439929 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606153846154 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2802266092 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8125 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.875 7.06120827912 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16060095423 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527058116715 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289412119361 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0873741951062 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372111052835 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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