You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar graphs illustrate that the types of music in percentages and distributed in gender and age in the UK. Overall, people aged 45 and more preferred classic music the most, while aged 25 to 34 stood quite high in all music types.
To start, apart from gender or age, pop and rock indicate very similar trends. Male accounted for about 29 per cent, while female occupied around 10 per cent lower, at precisely 19% in pop and rock music. Aged 25 to 34 accounted for far the most volume of approximately 32% in both, followed by this, group of 16 to 24 and 35 to 44 stood at nearly 30% and 26%, respectively. People aged over 45 made up the smallest proportion of about 8% only.
Surprisingly, figures of classic music demonstrate quite differences. Purchasers aged over 45 occupied the largest fractions of an approximately fifth, followed by the group of 25 to 34 recorded at slightly higher than 15%. Remaining groups accounted for lower proportions than 10%, who had level of around 9%, 7%, 1% and 3%, for each.
Consequently, it can be seen that pop and rock had almost same trends, with unloved by people over 45, however, classical music was selected far the most by them.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2023-11-03 | ililmaidatuz | 78 | view |
| 2023-10-05 | reverjae | 73 | view |
| 2023-10-05 | reverjae | 56 | view |
| 2023-10-05 | reverjae | 56 | view |
| 2022-11-25 | NSMDeadshot0411 | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70952380952 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66009394068 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1476884019 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 5.23603664747 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142508364077 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615756234225 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279202668522 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0887331394478 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378441176608 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.