The table below gives information on average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities
The table presents data about the average amount of time per day that men and women in the UK spend on different daily activities. Overall, it is evident that people in the UK spend the most time on sleeping. Beside that, men in the UK have more leisure, worked and studied time than women.
It can be seen from the table that UK males and females sleep for over 8 hours per day. There is not significant difference about average hours and minutes that men and women in the UK do some daily activities such as resting, eating and drinking, voluntary work and meetings.
On the other hand, men spend 5 hours and 25 minutes on doing some leisure activities, while the figure for women is 4 hours and 53 minutes. Worked and studied time of men are more than women. By contrast, women spend more time than men to do housework and take care of children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47133757962 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25099542534 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547770700637 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2778315201 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.75 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235212539188 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110238133225 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.098937266435 0.0843802449381 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191379635019 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130804873499 0.0819641961636 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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