The table below gives information on average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.

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The table below gives information on average hours and minutes spent by UK males and females on different daily activities.

The table illustrates the average amount of time per day spent by two sexual groups, men and women, on different activities in Britain.

Overall, it is clear that both males and females in the UK spend most of their time sleeping. Also, there is a significant difference between time spent on employment and study, housework, and childcare between the two groups.

On average, British males and females spend approximately 8 hours on sleep. Leisure activities take up the second largest proportion of their time. Men spend 5 hours and 25 minutes on doing activities like watching TV/DVD, listening to radio/music or doing sport, while women have 4 hours and 53 minutes for leisure time.

Males and females in the UK have a different amount of time daily for employment and study. Men spend 3 hours and 45 minutes on work, 79 minutes more than that of women. However, it takes females 96 hours more than men on doing housework and childcare.

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2022-05-08 Nozima Erkinjonova 78 view

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 791.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91304347826 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61995499793 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2224080262 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8888888889 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286724385775 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124414838387 0.103423049105 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664357930481 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175081485314 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469991016548 0.0819641961636 57% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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