The table below gives information on UK acid rain emissions, measured in millions of tones, from four different sectors between 1990 and 2007.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below
Given is the line chart compares four sectors in terms of acid rain emission in the UK during 17 years from 1990 to 2007.
It is clear that the total amount of acid rain emission in the UK fell considerably between 1990 and 2007. The most dramatic decrease was seen in the electricity, gas and water supply.
In 1991, around 3.3 million tonnes of acid emissions came from electricity, gas and water supply, followed by other industries with 2.1 million tonnes. Ranking the third position was transport and communication with 0.7 million tones. Just over 0.6 million tons of acid rain came from domestic.
In 2007, there was a grammatical decrease by 2.7 million tons in the amount of emission acid rain of the electricity, gas and water supply. A similar decreasing trend was repeated in other countries and domestic as there were 2 and 0.7 million tones of emission as respective. While acid rain from the transport and communication sector remained unchanged during 17 years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92168674699 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65296307802 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530120481928 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.7582854942 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7777777778 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4444444444 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260784766041 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123321372369 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771275206139 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184279924307 0.15604864568 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399800251455 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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