The table below highlights data on the number of travelers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012.
The statistics illustrates information about how many travelers use three airports namely (Dusseldorf, Frankfurt,and Berlin Tegel) in 6 years from 2007 to 2012.
Overall, it can be seen that the number of travelers who used Frankfurt airport increased dramatically over the period shown, while Tegel
airport visitor levelled off in the end of the period. However, Dusseldorf travelers show a fluctuation in their number.
Looking at the data in more detail, it can be seen that the number of dusseldorf visitors surged in the three years reached to (48.2) million of travelers per year.Then, there was a sudden plummet in the following two years and finally climbed to (45.0) million of visitors per year.
Turning to the remaining data, it is evident that frankfurt airport show a considerable soar in the number of visitors who used it, inth (36.5) million of travelers per year in 2007 and 69.3 million travelers per year in the las year 2012, which was the highest number of visitor among other airport.Whereas,the number of Berlin Teged visitors rocketed in the first three years until remained relatively static in the last three years (43.3) million of travelers per year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...velers per year in 2007 and 69.3 million travelers per year in the las year 2012...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, look, so, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15544041451 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81058354246 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538860103627 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.638793906 43.030603864 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.0 112.824112599 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.6 22.9334400587 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248010556814 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156389328147 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541945216265 0.0843802449381 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158833473694 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525174032773 0.0819641961636 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.2329268293 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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