The table compares Canada, Germany, and the UK in terms of the number of elderly people with ages from 65 in two years 1988 and 2000, and the projection for 2030.
It is clear that all countries have seen the increasing popularity of the senior aged 65 and more over the period shown. Overall, Germany had a larger percentage of the population falling into this group of ages than others and is expected to remain the first rank in 2030.
In 1988, the residents aged 65 and above occupied 20.45% of German, compared to 16.32% of Canadian and 14.23% of British. Both Germany and Canada experienced a remarkable increase in the proportion of senior citizens, by 4.87%, and 4.35% respectively, while the figure for the UK seemed to remain stable, rising insignificantly by a mere 0.66%.
Relating to the 2030's prediction, the percentage of old people is predicted to be highest in Germany with approximately a third of the population. The second position belongs to Canada despite its largest projected rise of 5.68%, followed by the UK, whose rate numbers 20.35%.
- Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grandchildren, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently.Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach yo 89
- the table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002 11
- The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries. 78
- The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. 78
- The pie charts below show the spending of a school in the UK from 1981 to 2001. 84
Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, second, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75460122699 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61440405928 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61963190184 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2036105276 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.714285714 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148214227789 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592844565599 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0424178480929 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931502211108 0.15604864568 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0118081162651 0.0819641961636 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.