The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of population aged 65 and above in three countries.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is the table contrasting the rate of the over-65s in Canada, Germany and the UK over a 12-year phase, commencing from 1988 and making predictions for the year 2030.
Perceptibly, three distinct countries seem to share a similar soaring trend in the percentage of the elderly aged 65 or so over the years. Furthermore, Germany is likely to have by far the highest population of this age group of all aforementioned places.
When it comes to the percentage of people in the age range of 65 or so in Germany, it always remained its leading position with 20% from the first year of the provided phase and 25% in the last year. Even though Canada experienced a similar 5% surge in the rate in the year 2000 from only 16% in the 1988s, it still comprised the second largest part. Likewise, constituting only 14% in 1988, the UK ranked last now that there was only a 1-percent accretion observed in the last year.
Twelve years later are supposed to bring a uniform 5 percent proliferation in the proportion of people in the age group of 65 or over in all three countries compared to the rates recorded in 2000 with 30% in Germany, 26% in Canada and 20% in the UK.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 121, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'so' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'sos'.
Suggestion: sos
...he percentage of the elderly aged 65 or so over the years. Furthermore, Germany is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, likewise, second, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50471698113 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63939858383 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556603773585 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.5623192555 43.030603864 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.428571429 112.824112599 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2857142857 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 5.23603664747 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115907038023 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580619538171 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452465645764 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803156660305 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400694659495 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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