The table below shows key data on demographics of four different countries.
The table compares the population, GDP per capita (measured in USD) and the average life span of China, Russia, the United States of America and the United Kingdom.
Overall, China is the most populous country but comprises the lowest GDP per capita among other countries. It is also noticeable that the UK consists of the smallest population and has the longest life expectancy.
China has a population of around 1.4 billion, which by far the highest, while its GDP per capita is the lowest at $ 6,807 compared to other nations. By contrast, the UK consists of the smallest population at roughly 64.9 million but has the longest life span.
The GDP per capita of the USA was the biggest figure at $53,681 whereas the average longevity was the shortest. Russia's population, GDP per capita and the average life expectancy are all on average, at nearly 144 million, $14,987 and 72.3 respectively.
- The graphs below show the total production and sources of electricity in two countries in 1980 and 2000. 67
- The pie charts below show the percentages of each material thrown out by the average household in California in 1985 and 2002. 78
- The table shows information and predictions regarding the change in the percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries. 56
- The line graph below shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia 73
- The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors- agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services- to the UK economy in the twentieth century. 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 752.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98013245033 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58735873194 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.8482708418 43.030603864 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.428571429 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.71428571429 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0233822687354 0.215688989381 11% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.012626234275 0.103423049105 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.020134266031 0.0843802449381 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.018775597656 0.15604864568 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188163242363 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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