The table below show results of a survey of urban residents opinion related to various aspects of life in 1980 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table chart give information about the result of a survey about the percentage urban resident in 1980 to 2010.
Overall, the percentage of urban resident in education was highest among six areas. Meanwhile,the rate of accommodation was lowest in 1980. However, we can see it clearly if we look at the specific decline.
Look at the table chart in 1980, the result of a survey in education ( good) about 82% highest among six areas and also had lowest ( bad) 6%. Meanwhile, transport system and accommodation was lowest ( good) 54% and 56% and bad ( 14, 10%). Environmental and Healthcare was higher second after education (75 and 72%). The survey of urban resident’ opinion about education and environmental had good feedback than other places.
Look at the table chart in 2010, the result of a survey in shops and health care had significant increased when from 75% to 81% and from 64% to 83%. Meanwhile, transport and accommodation also increased when from 54% to 67% and from 56% to 65%. However, the rate in shops was highest in this year ( 81%). Finally, education decreased from 82% to 76%. So, it can be seen that people opinion change over 30 years but can see they are tends to be shopping more than other areas.
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| 2024-12-05 | Trần Ánh Vy | 67 | view |
- As transport and accommodation problems are increasing in many cities some government encourages businesses to move to rural area Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages 67
- The most important function of music is that helps people reduce stress or relaxing To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- Some students to take a gap year after graduating high school to work and or travel The advantages and disadvantages of this 78
- The mixed chart below show the percentage children who learn musical instruments from 1996 to 2001 and the choice of musical instruments Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features relevant 73
- Some people believe that sport has an important role in society Others however feel that it is nothing more than a leisure activity for some people Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72641509434 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65880456654 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490566037736 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.4823139981 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0769230769 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3076923077 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.23603664747 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145934960085 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566008829417 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767550170937 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122240206588 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886612979852 0.0819641961636 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.89 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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