The table illustrates information of total number as well as gold, silver and bronze medals to the 10 most successful counties during Olympic games, in London, in 2012.
Overall, it is clear that the USA was the most successful country, furthermore, athletes from the US stood at top rank for gold and bronze medals. In contrast the least medals brought to their homeland sportsmen from Hungary. It could not be forgotten that number of silver and gold medals was more or less same.
America had won the most gold medals than any other participated country. While athletes represented the US had been awarded by 46 of them, however, in terms of continents, participated countries from Europe (Germany, UK, France and Italy) and Asia (Russia, China and South Korea) achieved almost the same number of gold medals (77 and 75 respectively). As a result overtook US by roughly 30 gold medals. Furthermore, American sportsmen in total had been awarded by the highest number of medals (104) what represented approximately twenty percent of all medals in London Olympic games in 2012. In contrast, their counterparts from Hungary gained only 17 medals in total.
As for silver and bronze medals, total number of medals was more or less same. When American athletes again won the most silver medals (29), Russian national sportsmen brought to their homeland the highest number of the bronze medals (32).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of gold medals 77 and 75 respectively. As a result overtook US by roughly 30 gold...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, so, well, while, as for, in contrast, as a result, as well as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1174.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08225108225 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.606096561 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532467532468 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 283.868780488 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3447584026 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.727272727 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258003125475 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101905008927 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.079895479843 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178261587304 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731215881232 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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