The table below shows the number of morals won by top countries in London 2012 Olympics game.

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The table below shows the number of morals won by top countries in London 2012 Olympics game.

The given tabular layout reveals the information about that the top ten countury by categories the number of models in London during the period 2012 in Olympic games.

Overall, it is evident that either maximum about of united states by gold ranked or minimum amount of Australia.

First of all, this all the based upon London 2012 Olympic games medals won .In Ten country involved for categories.In first country of data was 46,29,29,103. However, In second, and third country were data amount 38,29,27,17,23,19,88,65 Respectively.

Second of all, In another three country of data amount was differ. As well as, In Russia were data ratio 24, 26, 32,82. Nextly, In other two countury were been data amount 13, 11, 8,19,7,13,28,44. Although, In France ,and Germany was been given data amount 11,8,11,9,14,44,12,34 Respectively.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, third, well, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 131.0 196.424390244 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38167938931 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38312328216 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35322232996 2.65546596893 126% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648854961832 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4740172064 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.125 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.375 22.9334400587 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.125 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1653612032 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629634990118 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853687625439 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101089468491 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935867554467 0.0819641961636 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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