The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors who satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The given table demonstrates the total number of guests who visited the Ashdown Museum before and after the redecorating period. Meanwhile, the pie chart compares the satisfaction rate of travellers during these two durations.
According to the table, in the last year before the renovation work, there were around 74,000 chose Ashdown Museum as an entertainment destination to visit. Apparently, after the refurbishment is done, the Museum attracted more people, increase the total of visitors by one-third, to about 92,000 guests.
Looking at the pie chart, it is clear that the percentage of very satisfied and satisfied visitors rose significantly, nearly doubled and 30% than the year before redecorating, respectively. Besides the growth of pleasing proportion, Ashdown Museum also witnessed a dramatic flop in the number of dissatisfied visitors, which made up only 15% afterwards compared to 40% before. At the same time, the rate of people who did not respond remained stably around 5% in both two durations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, if, look, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41509433962 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0050522441 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672955974843 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8459897242 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.23603664747 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327264308435 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128802099767 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060640159452 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207328906872 0.15604864568 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403286821524 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.