These table and charts compare how many people visiting ashdown museum and their satisfaction before and after the decration.
As is shown in the top table, 74,000 people visited ashdown museum in the year before its refurbishment. And the number increased to 92,000 during the year after it was renovated.
We can see from the first pie chart that only 15 percent of visitors were very satisfied but it doubled the percentage after refurbishment at 35 percent in the second chart. There was also a slight growing of the proportion of people who were satisfied (from 30 percent to 40 percent.)
On the other hand, the percentage of visitors who felt dissatisfied dropped dramatically from 40 percent to 15 percent. In addition, there was a gentle falling in the proportion who were very dissatisfied. Finally 5 percent of people remained no response.
Overall, there was a noticeable rise in the number of visitors and rising level of satisfactory after the refurbishment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 206, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... proportion who were very dissatisfied. Finally 5 percent of people remained no respons...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, second, so, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05590062112 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91813114365 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2335543661 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4444444444 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 5.23603664747 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279375756304 0.215688989381 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117096180455 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796218768 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161326129696 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769082049094 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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