The table express the number of percentage for accommodation such as House, Duplex/Semi-detached house, Flat/Department and other in Victoria, the northern Territory, and Tasmania in 2001 and 2006.
Overall, Most of people liked to stay in House in all three states. However, other accommodation option was selected by least percentage of individual.
First of all, Victoria, The northern territory and Tasmania's large percentage of individual were interested to stay in House by individual, but it 2.1 percent in 2001 less than 2006. On the other state, it was also 11.5% more like to people stay in house in 2006 than 2001 exclude Tasmania where more person chose house accommodation in 2001.
Furthermore, second famous house was Semi/Duplex detached house in all area where the northern territory was highest interest in both year than flat department as well as Victoria and Tasmania. Although, some person also dweller in flat department, especially in Victoria ( 8.7 in 2001 and 9.3 in 2006)and northern territory (13.6 in 2001 and 7.9 in 2006). Next, other accommodation least chose of person in all area.
- In recent years, the structure of a family and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive and negative 56
- nowadays people prefer to shop in large supermarkets rather than nearby local shops. why do you think this happens? is this a positive or negative try and give your opinion and example from your own experience 85
- Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced They only care about how much it costs How true is this statement What influence people when they buy food 74
- The money given to help poor countries does not solve the problem of poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help instead. To what extent do agree or disagree. 56
- As people rely more and more technology to solve a problem availabiliy of human to thinks for themselve will surely deteriorate 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the people') or simply say ''Most people''.
Suggestion: Most of the people; Most people
...nd Tasmania in 2001 and 2006. Overall, Most of people liked to stay in House in all three sta...
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Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to house'
Suggestion: to house
...xclude Tasmania where more person chose house accommodation in 2001. Furthermore, se...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'was the highest'.
Suggestion: was the highest
...n all area where the northern territory was highest interest in both year than flat departm...
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Line 4, column 161, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...erest in both year than flat department as well as Victoria and Tasmania. Although, some p...
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Line 4, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... flat department, especially in Victoria 8.7 in 2001 and 9.3 in 2006and northern ...
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Line 4, column 365, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'accommodation the least'.
Suggestion: accommodation the least
....6 in 2001 and 7.9 in 2006. Next, other accommodation least chose of person in all area.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, second, so, well, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 178.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25842696629 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09029619362 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522471910112 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1177824287 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.375 5.23603664747 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143671503629 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709309622004 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495158375674 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981237057805 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027358286706 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.