The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011

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The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.

The table compares 1 nation in terms of the population who rode bicycles divided by age group in 2012.
Overall, it can be seen that almost the youngest people choose to cycle, especially women, while middle-aged men cycling had the lowest percentage over males.
As per the table, the cycling rate in the 2 genders was the most popular among the 0-9 age group, which comprised more than half of the town’s population. By contrast, females and males in middle age were not as preferable as young people, only 13,7% and 9,3% respectively.
Turning to these other categories, the number of bicycle riders in the 10-19 age group with the second highest proportion irrespective of gender, with 43,6 of females using bicycles compared to 25,1% of men. In addition, the group in 20-39 of 2 genders was less common and continued to decline sharply, 18,2% and 10,8% respectively. Finally, in the oldest age category of over 60, only 19,8% of women and 14,6% of men used bicycles.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, second, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88622754491 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58883543626 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658682634731 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6519455919 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.571428571 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8571428571 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25376050794 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115200808042 0.103423049105 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117173874181 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170068258607 0.15604864568 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129752440623 0.0819641961636 158% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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