the table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who roads bicycle in 2011.
The given table depict the ratio of people in different ages who used bicycle in 2011. The data is calibrated in percentage.
The most striking feature to be observed is that the highest bicycle used by boys and girls between 0-9 age group.
It can be vividly seen that from female, 10-19 age had maximum 51.3 percent followed by 10-17, 60, 18-39 age group with 42.2,18.5, and 17.1 percent respectively. 40-45 age group stood at lowest position.
Turning to rest of description, in case of male, 0-9 age group led with largest 50.3 percent whereas 10-17, 60 age group occupied second and third position with 24.6,13.2 percent orderly. 18 to 39, and 40 to 59 age group were equally reported. As far as comparison is concerned, the proportion of women for bicycle was more than the percentage of men. The ratio of women in 10-17 age was doubled from the same age of men.
- The map below the center of a town called Oslo as it is now, and plans for its development. 67
- some people think that the advantages of advertising sports products through famous sports players outweigh the disadvantages. to what e do you agree or disagree. 56
- the line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four college library and the pie chart shows the percentage of books by type that were borrowed over this time.summarize the information by selecting and rep 56
- some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we are care about them others think that there are better ways to show affection to them discuss both views and give your own opinion 82
- Some people believe that childrens leisure activities must be educational. otherwise they are complete waste of time. do you agree or disagree with the statement. give reason of your answer and include example from experience. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7012987013 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43640655682 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62987012987 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3981056267 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4444444444 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242567827827 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107343140633 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662932331145 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160023964999 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455425107528 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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