Nowadays the crime rate is increasing especially among teenagers. what are the reasons behind it, How can be reverse their trend? what punishment methods should be in your opinion.
It is well said that today's youngsters are the leaders of tomorrow. Presently, majority of the young people are involving themselves in crime activities. Here, I would like to account it's reasons along with it's solutions.
Manifold reasons are there to support my point of view. First and foremost, hectic schedule of parents one of the main reason of this worrying concern. To illustrate, parents have to work round the clock in order to earn two square meal. They are unable to spend quality time with their children and give social and moral values. Children join bad companies in the absenc...
- the pie chart shows the percentage of person arrested in the five years ending 1994 and the bar chart shows the most recent reason for arrest. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparison where relevant. 89
- some people believe that Olympics games do not have a role in the 21st century. do you u agree or disagree with the statement. 61
- Nowadays in many countries young people leave rural areas to study or work in cities, is it a positive or negative development? Do you think the advantage of this outweigh it's disadvantages. 56
- At the present time, the population of some countries include a large number of young people, compared with number of old people. Do the advantage of this situation outweigh the disadvantages. 78
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish why do you think is happen what can government do to reduce the amount of rubbish 92
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nd learn distinct methods of doing crime .furthermore, unemployment, inflation, ar...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...ung find hard to earn bread and butter. Thus crime rates between young generation is...
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Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...w on those programs which depicts crime in an effective way. To recapitulate, according to my p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1380.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.390625 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7981840512 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640625 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.5308010477 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.1764705882 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0588235294 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160122788506 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476999788564 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352161804706 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.091623140232 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00636762944431 0.056905535591 11% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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