The table below shows the percentage of the population and the types of houses they live in 3 areas of a city. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the information of the number of people and their kinds of accommodation in three particular cities.
Overall, what stands out from the table is that almost the same number of people live in the three places but with the changes of places the living types also varied such as in the green park most people live in the flat and detached in the central park.
According to the data table, most people live in the central area among the three places which is 32100. Whereas, 31700 stay in the green park and which is the least amount. The highest percentage of people 39% lead detached life in the central area, while the percentage is 5 in the case of the green park. On the other hand, 76% of people have a flat as their living accommodation which is 15% in the central area. Moreover, in terraced, the portion is closed to each other 18 and 14% for former and later places respectively. Finally, the semi-detached difference between them is 23%.
Turning to the Southberg area where 32000 people live and there more than half of the people live in the terraced and one quarter live in the flat. In terms of semi-detached, the value is the same as the green park. In addition, 14% of people live detached.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'stay' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'stays'.
Suggestion: stays
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, in addition, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1017.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60180995475 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44479600323 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47963800905 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5109995801 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4545454545 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0909090909 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.45454545455 5.23603664747 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130583519145 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051940374848 0.103423049105 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437042665967 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890031452191 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139793291163 0.0819641961636 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.4 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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