The table below shows the results of a survey to find out what members of a city sports club think about the club’s activities, facilities, and opening hours. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make any comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the opinion of participants from a particular sports association in one city about three features including the club's activities, facilities and opening hours.
Overall, it can be clearly seen that there was an agreement between men and women about club facilities. However, while females were keen on opening hours, a range of activities was the most preferred by males.
Regarding the physical assets, the percentages of males and females pleased with the provision were at nearly a similar level, at around seven-eighth. The figures for the negative response of women and men were insubstantially, about 15% and 10%, respectively
On the other hand, the female attitudes to the diversity in activities and business hours contradicted the opposite sex. While almost one hundred percent of female members were satisfied or very satisfied with the club's working time, well over a third of male members were dissatisfied with it. Furthermore, there were just five percent of men disagreeable with the number of exercises, whereas just under third-quarters of women had positive responses to it.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, regarding, so, third, well, whereas, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 944.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39428571429 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01455516737 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645714285714 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9927818435 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.857142857 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8571428571 5.23603664747 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145635471586 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706327656115 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722865507755 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101649559261 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803018462469 0.0819641961636 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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