The table below shows sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the table gives information about the sale of four different typical weekday menu that is sold by a coffee shop in an office building. It is measured in portion. In general, it can be seen that beverages and pastries gain the supreme portions of sales at 07.30 until 10.30 while sandwiches at 10.30-2.30.
Based on the data, sales of pastries in the morning is the uppermost serving for a long day. It is 10 portions higher than coffee at the same time. While the bottommost sale of pastries is 80 portions at 05.30 pm to 8.30 pm that is 35 portions greater than tea. Even though, sandwiches owe the largest portion in this time.
Meanwhile, sale of tea at 2.30-5.30 pm is the undermost menu that is sold in coffee shop for a long day. It is 15 feeds lesser than tea at 10.30 am until 2.30 am and 5 portions lower than sandwiches in the same time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the table gives information about the sale ...
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Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'menu' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'menus'.
Suggestion: menus
... sale of four different typical weekday menu that is sold by a coffee shop in an off...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ns higher than coffee at the same time. While the bottommost sale of pastries is 80 p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 698.0 965.302439024 72% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41772151899 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4445132294 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53164556962 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 283.868780488 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4569761652 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5555555556 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102417017911 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578965956022 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0960807290545 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838779768594 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569237612807 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 61.2550243902 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.3012195122 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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