The table below shows the weight of people in a particular country from 1999 to 2009

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The table below shows the weight of people in a particular country from 1999 to 2009.

The table compares the percentage of males and females about body condition in a particular nation between 1999 and 2009.
Generally, the proportion of the person having a normal weight was the largest in both genders during the research period. In addition, the overweight group of women increased, the opposite was true for men.
As can be seen from the table, in 1999, 49% of girls had a normal weight, while the figure for those who were underweight stood at about half of that percent. A similar pattern was seen in boys but the figures were smaller, at 41% and 22% respectively. The number of gentlemen owning the weight exceeding allowed was 30%, compared to 18% of lady.
The rates of standard weight women and men rose to 51% and 48% respectively in 2004 before falling to 47% each in 2009. Similarly, the number of fat people in both genders accounted for the smallest percentages of the population in 2004, at 21% for females and 23% for their counterpart, and both figures then went down to 19% each in 2009. Despite a rise of 2% in the first five years, the proportion of girls with underweight then fell by 1%. However, the reverse trends were witnessed in underweight boy's rate, lifted to 23% in 2009 after decreasing to 20% in 2004.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, similarly, so, then, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66515837104 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57822479527 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9109482867 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172074600391 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614744722832 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625176020685 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107906449141 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0664371848689 0.0819641961636 81% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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