The table below shows the worldwide market share of the notebook computer market for manufacturers in the years 2006 and 2007.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The supplied table presents information about the market percentage between the years 2006 and 2007.
In the given period, the HP company reached the maximum in the total market share in both years, first touching the 31.4% and then the overall maximum, 34 %. The second-highest seller was the Dell company, which has around half of HP’s market percentage in selling. Anyhow, it experienced the most significant improvement among all the listed companies, with a 4 point increase in 2007.
The other companies had less than one-third of HP’s market number each. For instance, Acer slight declined in the period under study, moving from 11.6% to 10.7%. Conversely, Toshiba moved up its sales of the same percentage lost by Acer, while Lenovo company had a mild reduction in its ratio, passing from 6.2% to 6.6%. However, Fujitsu-Siemens showed the worst downward trend, loosing precisely 2.5 percentage points.
Finally, the remaining companies owned little more than one-fifth (22.8%) of the total market share in 2006. This number fell to 19.3% in the subsequent year.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, however, if, second, then, third, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38011695906 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85563971895 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701754385965 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.8523023646 43.030603864 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179495177395 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772005389794 0.103423049105 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736867657902 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134266579909 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822695328043 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 11.4140731707 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.