table depicts the rate of people located in different regions
The given table depicts the rate of people located in different regions and the total population on Earth during the surveyed period of 1950-2050
Overall, it is clearly seen that while the number of people locating in Africa, Asia, Latin America and Oceania followed upwards trends, the remaining areas witnessed opposing trends in the distribution of population. In addition, it is striking that the global population has growth rapidly from 2,5 to 6 billions and is estimated at 9 billions in 2050.
A closer look at the chart reveals that regardless of time, the Asian made up most of the world population. To be more specific, this percentage was reported at 56 percent in 1995, increased to 6 percent in the next 50 years and is expected to meet 59 percent in 2050. Similarly, the proportion of Africa dwellers had grown up by 4 percent from only 9 percent in 1950, and is forecast to rocket to 20 percent,making it the second most populous area in the world just behind Asia. The first 50-year period experienced a light rise from 6 to 9 percent in the rate of Latin American citizens; however, this figure seems to stabilize at 9 percent in the subsequent 50 years.There was not much changes in the number of people living in Oceania as its range was only around 1 per cent.
In contrast, the proportion of European plummeted from 22 to 12 percent and is predicted to decrease by 5 percent in 2050. North America accounted for only 7 percent of the total global population; nevertheless, the percentage has the tendency to decline to approximately 4 percent after 100 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , making
... and is forecast to rocket to 20 percent,making it the second most populous area in the...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...at 9 percent in the subsequent 50 years.There was not much changes in the number of p...
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Line 5, column 685, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...n the subsequent 50 years.There was not much changes in the number of people living ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, second, similarly, well, while, in addition, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 33.7804878049 166% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 965.302439024 136% => OK
No of words: 275.0 196.424390244 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78909090909 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80789912936 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 106.607317073 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552727272727 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 283.868780488 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 34.0 22.4926829268 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.464082368 43.030603864 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.625 112.824112599 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.375 22.9334400587 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.625 5.23603664747 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145275589916 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585893206773 0.103423049105 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132824596074 0.0843802449381 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157934609577 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.217101189731 0.0819641961636 265% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.89 61.2550243902 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 40.7170731707 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.9970731707 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.