The table displays trends concerning the amounts of fast food consumed in Melbourne. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
You should write at least 150 words.
Writing Task 1
The chart consist of data pertaining to the consumption pattern of various foods in the year 2005, present and also a projection of the year 2025. This data is collected in Melbourne and is represented in units.
In the year 2005 shows the highly consumed dish would be Hambuger at 40 units. The second highest consumption would be Fried Chicken at 35 units. Thirdly the Fried Rice and Noodles are consumed equally at 6 units each. Lastly Salad the consumption is at 5 units.
In the Present though there is a reduced consumption of Hambuger it still remains the highly consumed food at 38 units. Dishes such as Fried Chicken ,Salad, Fried Rice and Noodles have been consumed more when compared to 2005 at 37 units, 15 units, 9 units and 8 units respectively.
The projection for the year 2025 states that not only will the consumption of Hambuger have an upward trend in consumption, but also be the highly consumed food in the year 2025 at 51 units. Following which Fried Chicken is consumed at 45 units, which would be higher than the past years. Salad's consumption will increase many folds to 41 units. Fried Rice's consumption will be the same as that of the present. A slight increase in the consumption of noodles at 9 units in the year 2025.
To conclude we can clearly say that unlike the historical data from the year 2005 the projected data for the year 2025 will show vast difference in the consumption pattern.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-01-04 | AhaanIshaan | 11 | view |
| 2022-02-24 | Awadhesh Mourya | 73 | view |
| 2021-11-11 | sahil singh | view | |
| 2021-08-27 | AhaanIshaan | 11 | view |
| 2021-08-06 | thaovy03032005 | 76 | view |
- The diagram shows the production of hydroelectricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 16
- The use of corporal punishment physically hitting students in schools is in decline yet it should be used to improve behaviour To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 61
- The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
- Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne The maps show the town s development over a period of time Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant You should write at least 150 words Writing Task 82
- Many people today especially in the developed world are choosing to have fewer children or none at all Why is this happening and do you think it is a good trend 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t 38 units. Dishes such as Fried Chicken ,Salad, Fried Rice and Noodles have been ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, second, so, still, third, thirdly, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 965.302439024 123% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69444444444 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56864377425 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464285714286 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.5903226353 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0770134790723 0.215688989381 36% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382228866495 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0258818750929 0.0843802449381 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0497779004966 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280748849817 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.