the table shows the average weekly salaries of men and women working in different occupations

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the table shows the average weekly salaries of men and women working in different occupations

The table gives information on how much men and women earned on average each week in different types of jobs during 2015.

Overall, the amount of salary received varied according to the occupation. However, men received a higher salary than women for the same job.

To begin with, men's average salary varied according to the occupation. Professionals earned the highest salary of 2000 dollars per week. The next highest-earning position is technicians, who earned 1400$ on a weekly basis. The occupation that is least paid was manual labours, with 1100$ pay each week.

Women's average salaries also varied by occupation, but in each case, they were lower than the men's salaries. Similar to men, professional women earned a higher amount of wages, accounting to $1900 for a week, which is $100 less than men's salary. The second-highest earners were administrative/clerical workers, earning $1000 per week, which is $350 less than the men administrative/ clerical workers and $400 less than the second highest earning group of men (technicians). The least earners were manual labourers, earning$850 each week and are $250 less than the male manual laborers.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 36, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
The table gives information on how much men and women earned on average each we...
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Line 9, column 199, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1400'.
Suggestion: $1400
...ing position is technicians, who earned 1400$ on a weekly basis. The occupation that ...
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Line 9, column 283, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1100'.
Suggestion: $1100
... is least paid was manual labours, with 1100$ pay each week. Womens average sala...
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Line 13, column 125, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... than the mens salaries. Similar to men, professional women earned a higher amoun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24324324324 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05893415412 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562162162162 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0884157315 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.1818181818 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322732695821 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140030223993 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802823519813 0.0843802449381 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219636836263 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.059219312353 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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