the tables below give information about sales of Fairtarde-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries
The two tables compare the consumption of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in UK, Swizerland, Denmark, Belgium and Sweden in the years of 1999 and 2004.
Overall, the sales of both coffee and bananas saw an obvious increase in those countries with different range, without Sweden and Denmark which consumed less bananas from 1.8 millions of to 1 million, from 2 million to 0.9 million respectively.
The amount of coffee sales rise in all the five countries from 1999 to 2004. There was the most dramatic increase in the total sale of coffee in UK, from 1.5 millions of euros to 20 million, and the number almost timed 15. Additionally, the number of the coffee selling in Swizerland arise from 3 to 6. There was a slight increase in the other three countries, 0.2 millions,0.7 millions, 0.2 millions seperately.
Swizerland experienced the biggest increase in the sales of bananas in 2004, and the number had changed from 15 to 47. UK also saw a up trend from 1 to 5.5 in the year of 2004. However, there was a minor decrease in Sweden and Denmark, which was 0.8 millions and 1.1 millions respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '8 million'.
Suggestion: 8 million
...mark which consumed less bananas from 1.8 millions of to 1 million, from 2 million to 0.9 mil...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
... the total sale of coffee in UK, from 1.5 millions of euros to 20 million, and the number alm...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... had changed from 15 to 47. UK also saw a up trend from 1 to 5.5 in the year of 2...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82291666667 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83668230386 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8234889765 43.030603864 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.888888889 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209529883268 0.215688989381 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107632102679 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105152351979 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151941998762 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0589028199842 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.