The society is based on rules and laws. The society would not function well if individuals were free to do whatever they want. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Both laws and moral standards play a vital role in a country, and there is a view that the society will be disordered when people are totally free to do anything they like. From my point of view, I believe that the peaceful world will be destructed when there is not any behavior roles and moral standards.
To begin with, the sources like money, power,social status can not be divided to every member of a community equally, therefore there is a gap between individuals’ expectation and reality. This may result in someone’s deliquency, for example stealing,robbing and so on if there isn’t criminal law and civil law to obey human’s behavior. Secondly, the whole society will be unsafe and disordered when the crimes are often emerged, and soon people are sure to lose hope of the police power and party,which is obviously a dangerous signal to a country. America can be taken as an example,there are a large number of people died caused by gun shooting as an individual can buy a gun easily in a local shop although there is some restrictions for buyers.
Moreover, people are willing to invade other’s legally rights when there are no limits for their behaviors. The golden watches and expensive luxuries in a rich family will be stolen easily when entering other’s homes is not banned by the law. Therefore, the safety system of the whole society will be destroyed. So most of individuals do not have the power to control themselves well when rules does not exist,and then the government have to pay a lot of money to the construction of penalty system instead of boosting economy.
However, it can not be oversaw that there are some people can behavior well although there is not something control them,and we can call them-moral models. But the amount of those citizens is quite small,and a country can not function well when most people are easily to commit a crime.
In conclusion, either a community or a society can not safe when there are not any restrictions for people’s behaviors,and the society will not develop fast if it is disordered. So rules and laws are powerful to control a person’s deliquency, although some people are less likely to commit a crime.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , social
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Suggestion: , robbing
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
... lose hope of the police power and party,which is obviously a dangerous signal to a co...
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Suggestion: , there
...ntry. America can be taken as an example,there are a large number of people died cause...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Message: Did you mean 'there are some restrictions'?
Suggestion: there are some restrictions
...y a gun easily in a local shop although there is some restrictions for buyers. Moreover, people are wil...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the individuals') or simply say ''most individuals''.
Suggestion: most of the individuals; most individuals
...the whole society will be destroyed. So most of individuals do not have the power to control themse...
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Suggestion: , and
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Suggestion: , and
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Suggestion: , and
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1827.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 376.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85904255319 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80592921138 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521276595745 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.6398442268 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.5 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8571428571 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139988432472 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541209328914 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486147591562 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874559761749 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300389674964 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.