The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1997 and 2004 in five European countries

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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1997 and 2004 in five European countries.

The given tables illustrate the amount of money spent on fairtrade coffee and bananas in the two separate years in five different European nations namely the uk, switzerland, denmark, belgium, and sweden.
it can be seen that all nations saw an upward trend in sales of fairtrade coffee from 1999 to 2000, but sales of fairtrade bananas went up in three out of the five countries. it is noticeable that the uk was the highest spending on two products by far.
In 1999, switzerland had the highest sales of fairtrade coffee with 3 million euros, while revenue from fairtrade banana was the highest in the uk, at 15 million euros. By 2004, the number of money spent on fairtrade coffee in the uk significantly rose to 20 million euros and this was higher three times than switzerland sales figures for fairtrade coffee. Aditionally, we can saw a dramatic increases in the uk and switzerland in fairtrade bananas, with revenue risen by 32 and 4,5 million euros respectively.
sales of the two products saw by far lower in denmark, belgium, and sweden. Small increase can be seen in fairtrade coffee, but revenue still remained at 2 million or below in all three nations in both years. it is clear that the sales of fairtrade bananas was dropped in belgium and sweden

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...gnificantly rose to 20 million euros and this was higher three times than switzer...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1047.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75909090909 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.622609104 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495454545455 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4809903482 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.333333333 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4444444444 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24598821151 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111207568712 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725204401292 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167781253453 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247935638941 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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