the map represents the modification that have taken place at West Park secondary school from 1950 to 2010 years . overall, we can see that 3maps in 1950, 1980 and 2010 . In 1950s map there was main road on the top of the map and the meanly is the main road has not changed throughout years . in the bottom left hand corner was farmland but we can see that in 1980s map farmland is replaced with sports field and beside there was playground. moreover, playground was not changing in 1980s map but in 2010 have been reduced. to the left of map there was houses in 1950s map but after this houses instead of car park and science block in 1980s map then 2010s map car park improved , next sports field reduced in 2010s map . Furthermore there was school in 1950s map yet school there was a little changing to main building and an 2010s map there was not changing in the scool main building
- MAPThe diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- MAPThe diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 56
- The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries Summarise the information by selecting an reporting the main features and make comparisons where ralevant 14
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the map represents the modification that ha...
^^^
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...secondary school from 1950 to 2010 years . overall, we can see that 3maps in 1950,...
^^
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...ondary school from 1950 to 2010 years . overall, we can see that 3maps in 1950, 1980 an...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an see that 3maps in 1950, 1980 and 2010 . In 1950s map there was main road on th...
^^
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n see that 3maps in 1950, 1980 and 2010 . In 1950s map there was main road on the...
^^
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'In the 1950s'.
Suggestion: In the 1950s
...ee that 3maps in 1950, 1980 and 2010 . In 1950s map there was main road on the top of t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...in road has not changed throughout years . in the bottom left hand corner was farm...
^^
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...road has not changed throughout years . in the bottom left hand corner was farmlan...
^^
Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1980s'.
Suggestion: in the 1980s
...corner was farmland but we can see that in 1980s map farmland is replaced with sports fi...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 443, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
... field and beside there was playground. moreover, playground was not changing in 1980s m...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 481, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1980s'.
Suggestion: in the 1980s
.... moreover, playground was not changing in 1980s map but in 2010 have been reduced. to t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 525, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...980s map but in 2010 have been reduced. to the left of map there was houses in 19...
^^
Line 1, column 543, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...10 have been reduced. to the left of map there was houses in 1950s map but after ...
^^
Line 1, column 562, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1950s'.
Suggestion: in the 1950s
...d. to the left of map there was houses in 1950s map but after this houses instead of c...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 585, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...there was houses in 1950s map but after this houses instead of car park and science...
^^^^
Line 1, column 596, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ouses in 1950s map but after this houses instead of car park and science block in...
^^
Line 1, column 636, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1980s'.
Suggestion: in the 1980s
... instead of car park and science block in 1980s map then 2010s map car park improved , ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 681, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...80s map then 2010s map car park improved , next sports field reduced in 2010s map ...
^^
Line 1, column 710, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 2010s'.
Suggestion: in the 2010s
...rk improved , next sports field reduced in 2010s map . Furthermore there was school in 1...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 722, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., next sports field reduced in 2010s map . Furthermore there was school in 1950s m...
^^
Line 1, column 725, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ext sports field reduced in 2010s map . Furthermore there was school in 1950s map yet schoo...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 754, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1950s'.
Suggestion: in the 1950s
...010s map . Furthermore there was school in 1950s map yet school there was a little chang...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 827, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... a little changing to main building and an 2010s map there was not changing in the...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37195121951 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16897605493 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 184.5 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3179245521 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.428571429 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 1.69756097561 1355% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0248984093485 0.215688989381 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0138929637977 0.103423049105 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219886575397 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0248984093485 0.15604864568 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.43 61.2550243902 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 40.7170731707 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
the map represents the modification that ha...
^^^
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...secondary school from 1950 to 2010 years . overall, we can see that 3maps in 1950,...
^^
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Overall
...ondary school from 1950 to 2010 years . overall, we can see that 3maps in 1950, 1980 an...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an see that 3maps in 1950, 1980 and 2010 . In 1950s map there was main road on th...
^^
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n see that 3maps in 1950, 1980 and 2010 . In 1950s map there was main road on the...
^^
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'In the 1950s'.
Suggestion: In the 1950s
...ee that 3maps in 1950, 1980 and 2010 . In 1950s map there was main road on the top of t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 291, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...in road has not changed throughout years . in the bottom left hand corner was farm...
^^
Line 1, column 294, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...road has not changed throughout years . in the bottom left hand corner was farmlan...
^^
Line 1, column 358, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1980s'.
Suggestion: in the 1980s
...corner was farmland but we can see that in 1980s map farmland is replaced with sports fi...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 443, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Moreover
... field and beside there was playground. moreover, playground was not changing in 1980s m...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 481, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1980s'.
Suggestion: in the 1980s
.... moreover, playground was not changing in 1980s map but in 2010 have been reduced. to t...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 525, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
...980s map but in 2010 have been reduced. to the left of map there was houses in 19...
^^
Line 1, column 543, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...10 have been reduced. to the left of map there was houses in 1950s map but after ...
^^
Line 1, column 562, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1950s'.
Suggestion: in the 1950s
...d. to the left of map there was houses in 1950s map but after this houses instead of c...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 585, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...there was houses in 1950s map but after this houses instead of car park and science...
^^^^
Line 1, column 596, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ouses in 1950s map but after this houses instead of car park and science block in...
^^
Line 1, column 636, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1980s'.
Suggestion: in the 1980s
... instead of car park and science block in 1980s map then 2010s map car park improved , ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 681, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...80s map then 2010s map car park improved , next sports field reduced in 2010s map ...
^^
Line 1, column 710, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 2010s'.
Suggestion: in the 2010s
...rk improved , next sports field reduced in 2010s map . Furthermore there was school in 1...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 722, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
..., next sports field reduced in 2010s map . Furthermore there was school in 1950s m...
^^
Line 1, column 725, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...ext sports field reduced in 2010s map . Furthermore there was school in 1950s map yet schoo...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 754, Rule ID: IN_1990s[1]
Message: The article is probably missing here: 'in the 1950s'.
Suggestion: in the 1950s
...010s map . Furthermore there was school in 1950s map yet school there was a little chang...
^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 827, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... a little changing to main building and an 2010s map there was not changing in the...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, second, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37195121951 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16897605493 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487804878049 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 184.5 283.868780488 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3179245521 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.428571429 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 1.69756097561 1355% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0248984093485 0.215688989381 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0138929637977 0.103423049105 13% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0219886575397 0.0843802449381 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0248984093485 0.15604864568 16% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.43 61.2550243902 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.36 11.4140731707 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 40.7170731707 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.