The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
Summarise the information by selecting an reporting the main features, and make comparisons where ralevant.
The two tables inllustrate sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas which were consumed in five European countries between 1999 and 2004.
Overall, people living in the European were likely to purchase bananas more than coffee during that five years, especially in Switzerland.
The first table shows information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee in 1999 and 2004. In the UK, the number of people who consumed coffee increased dramatically, which led to a steep growth in sales of coffee from 1.5-20 millions, while the sales of coffee in Denmark and Sweden witnessed a slight increase from 1.8-2 millions and from 0.8-1 millions respectively. In Switzerland, the figure for sales of coffee in 2004 was 2 times as high as that in 1990, at 6 millions and 3 millions respectively. The sales of coffee in Belgium grew moderately from 1-1.7 millions.
Besides, the second table gives the figure for sales of Fairtrade-labelled bananas. The sales in Switzerland underwent a sharp rise of 32 millions. While the figure for sales of bananas in UK and Belgium increased considerably from 1-5.5 millions and from 0.6-4 millions respectively, the sales in Denmark and Sweden experienced a moderate growth from 2-0.9 millions and from 1.8-1 millions respectively.
Comparing the two tables, it can be seen that in 1999, the figure for sales of coffee fluctuated between 0.8 and 1.8 millions in five European countries when the sales of bananas fluctuated between 0.6 and 2 millions, except Switzerland, at 15 millions.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25819672131 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12150637823 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450819672131 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.0923171637 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.3 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263920984657 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151197592774 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124275224762 0.0843802449381 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181975884 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892541137392 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 965.302439024 133% => OK
No of words: 244.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25819672131 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12150637823 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450819672131 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 366.3 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.0923171637 43.030603864 181% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.3 112.824112599 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263920984657 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151197592774 0.103423049105 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124275224762 0.0843802449381 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181975884 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892541137392 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.