the tables below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five Europian countries.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The tables compare the data sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas between 1999 and 2004 in five countries such as UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and Sweden. overall, the amount of coffee sales at 1999 was highest in Denmark stuck in 1.8 Million Euros, and the second higher was UK in 1.5. And the lowest happened in two countries, first Belgium in only 1, and the second is Switzerland just 3. Yet, Belgium at 2004 was the second higher in 1.7 after the first higher was UK in 2004 was 20.
With regard to the interested nations to sell bananas highest was Switzerland in 15 at 1999, than the another Europe nations such as Sweden only had 1.8 and Belgium was 0.6 at 1999. the lowest sales is UK and Denmark which is only had 1 and 2. meanwhile, in 2004 Switzerland was the highest which had 47, the second higher is UK around 5.5. Denmark had a standard sales volume it is 0.9. the last, Sweden and Belgium had decreased it was 1 for Sweden and 4 for Belgium.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, while, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45810055866 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50587151086 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.474860335196 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1214126135 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118326639709 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822707399302 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770439420776 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104662271805 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490158951275 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.88 61.2550243902 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.18 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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