Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Tarnagul is a small town located near Melbourne. The maps present the towns' changes over 100 years.
Overall, it is clear that in 1990 to 1950 the town was a rural area, in which the main activities were agriculture and pastoral. Further at the end of the period the town was changed into a tourist destination
First of all, in 1990 the town area located in the central surrounded from the north by orange farm and in the south by mandarins farm, whereas a river run through the town.In addition a dairy situated in the west across the river and opposite the town area. A main road goes from the east to the west through the river and town area.
So as to, the year 1995 the town area was enlarged. Furthermore,the mandarins farm was replaced by an orange farm also the dairy was removed and replaced by an larger lemons and grapefruit farm.
Packing shades with its' track was constructed.
Finally, regarding to the final year the packing shades was demolished a local museum and craft market built instead, the town area almost back to the same size in 1990. Moreover, a new park besides the old southern orange farm was built, the frames became underutilized region. a Wildlife sanctuary was built rather than the lemon farm.
- In many countries more and more men are staying at home to look after their children when women work full time What are the reasons Is it a positive or negative development 76
- In many countries, plastic shopping bags are the main type of rubbish. They cause water pollution and land pollution, so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree? 73
- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness is decreasing.What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them? 73
- Does the advantages of public transportation outweigh the disadvantages to what extend do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Further,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, regarding, so, whereas, as to, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6880733945 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43389584876 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564220183486 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 83.7424228717 43.030603864 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9090909091 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8181818182 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3636363636 5.23603664747 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171272317029 0.215688989381 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900997838959 0.103423049105 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101998881413 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111066569943 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119705924026 0.0819641961636 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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