Task 1: The bar chart shows types of media to get daily news, by age groups 2011
Given is the bar chart depicting the discrepancy of five distinct age groups in the methods of acquiring the latest information daily in the year 2011.
It is conspicuous that radio was the most favorable media means of all people except for the youngest one who was in the age of 10 to 17. Meanwhile, microblogging seemed not to be accessed more than the other types by all of the respondents.
In terms of social networking, the popularity was deemed to decrease when users got older with more than 80% used by those who were in 10 to 29. However, this number dropped significantly by 30% because of the changes in accessing news behaviors of middle-aged people. News readers who were in the age of 65 and over did not spend much time on social networking with only 25% documented compared to 40% of the 50 to 64 aged group.
Regarding the most prevalent approach to daily information, radio was named with more than 85% accounted by nearly all age groups apart from the teens with only 40%. More specifically, roughly 92% was documented by the second youngest group while the oldest group had a 10% lower in access. In opposition, microblogging held the lowest position when not any groups preferred it as the way to obtain news. While the young adults who were 18 to 29 tended to use it more than the other four groups, it only made up approximately 25% which was 7% and 10% higher than that of readers aged 30 to 49 and 50 to 64 respectively. Similarly, respondents in the oldest age did not favor it much with only 10% which was the lowest percentage recorded in the year 2011.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, second, similarly, so, while, apart from, except for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 286.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54895104895 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67941924598 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 106.607317073 145% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541958041958 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 283.868780488 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0363124039 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.272727273 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21673897169 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088810985101 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693190884343 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152410650252 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755969304428 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 40.7170731707 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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