• Task 1: The graph below gives information about the price of bananas in four countries between 1984 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows the statistics about the price of bananas in four countries from 1994 to 2004.
Overall, Japan showed the highest price of bananas and the lowest belonged to the USA. Moreover, there was an upward trend on the price of bananas in Japan, USA whereas the opposite was true in France, Germany.
Looking at more details, after starting with the highest price among four countries in 1994, 2$ per kilogram, Japan sharply rose and reached a peak at under 3$ in 1995. After that, there were some fluctuations in the price over 8 years and it hit the trough at above 1.5$ which ranked second in 2001. With roughly 1.6$, France ranked second in 1994 and remained stable 3 years before witnessing some fluctuations in the rest period and finishing at under 1.6$.
Regarding Germany, the figure fluctuated from 1994 to 2002. Between 2002 and 2004, the price of bananas remained unchanged at about 1.25$, the third highest number. The USA had the lowest price of bananas with only under 1$ per kilogram and showed a significant increase by 0.5$. Between 1995 and 2004, the figure was roughly around from 1 to 1.2$.
- Task 2 Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- Task 1 The diagram below shows how one type of coal is used to produce electricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
- Task 1 The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60 64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Task 2 It is a natural process that animal species such as dinosaurs become extinct There is no reason for people to prevent this from happening Do you agree or disagree 73
- Task 1 Table 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 95, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...est price among four countries in 1994, 2$ per kilogram, Japan sharply rose and re...
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Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$3'.
Suggestion: $3
...harply rose and reached a peak at under 3$ in 1995. After that, there were some fl...
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Line 3, column 270, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$5'.
Suggestion: $5
... years and it hit the trough at above 1.5$ which ranked second in 2001. With rough...
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Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$6'.
Suggestion: $6
...h ranked second in 2001. With roughly 1.6$, France ranked second in 1994 and remai...
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Line 3, column 458, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$6'.
Suggestion: $6
...he rest period and finishing at under 1.6$. Regarding Germany, the figure fluctu...
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Line 4, column 135, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$25'.
Suggestion: $25
...f bananas remained unchanged at about 1.25$, the third highest number. The USA had ...
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Line 4, column 222, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1'.
Suggestion: $1
...lowest price of bananas with only under 1$ per kilogram and showed a significant i...
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Line 4, column 277, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$5'.
Suggestion: $5
... and showed a significant increase by 0.5$. Between 1995 and 2004, the figure was ...
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Line 4, column 346, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$2'.
Suggestion: $2
...e figure was roughly around from 1 to 1.2$.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, regarding, second, so, third, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 929.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7641025641 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27702702465 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558974358974 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0887078077 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151516027712 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745366056011 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678336258273 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122307562044 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0702313402947 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.