Given table enumerates the proportion of various age groups involved in different leisure activities before four weeks for their interviews. Overall watching TV dominated than the other time passing activities, incontrast dress making, needle work and knitting showed the least a tractive by all age groups in these periods.
Firstly, waching TVand vedios were equally popular in all age groups before interviews. Secondly, visiting family and friends stood high rate eventhough reduced slightly in the last group. Listening to tapes and audios took third and fourth position with slightly less popularity but, 60 to 69 group showed a less atraction towards the tapes.
Reading books managed to keep an above 50 percentage position in all age groups, while the rest of the groups witnessed a dramatic flactuation over the age groups. For DIY the middle group maintained a 50 percentage,on the otherhands the other people were less attracted towards it. Youth showed less interest in gardening and dress making while as the age increased it become increasingly popular.
In conclusion, before the interviews the people showed interests in different activities, which varied conciderably on the basis of age groups.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , on
... middle group maintained a 50 percentage,on the otherhands the other people were le...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...ss making while as the age increased it become increasingly popular. In conclusion, b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, third, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43915343915 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74645478998 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2503033645 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.222222222 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 5.23603664747 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0435315839517 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0219001976676 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619431131204 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0294634574152 0.15604864568 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510322052097 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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